hi Presley, We have done this research together and put a lot of effort in, but you need to improve on something, so what I think you need to improve on is you need your spelling to get better, that's why I corrected the mistakes .The good thing is that you have tried to fill the page with information and I like that. From Ridith
I like the way you have presented your learning about muscles. Remember to say where your information came from, e.g. the name of the website. Mrs Krausse
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ReplyDeletehi Presley,
ReplyDeleteWe have done this research together and put a lot of effort in, but you need to improve on something, so what I think you need to improve on is you need your spelling to get better, that's why I corrected the mistakes .The good thing is that you have tried to fill the page with information and I like that.
From Ridith
Hello Presley,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have presented your learning about muscles. Remember to say where your information came from, e.g. the name of the website.
Mrs Krausse