Remember that time when you your dad and your cousin went to the movies to watch Tarzan?
Remember the part when there was killing, shooting and Indians had bows and arrows; you were watching, and then at the end your dad was crying?
That was the holiday's.
Remember when you, your uncle and cousin went to play ten pin bowling?
Remember when you put your name in and then you cousin put her name up; she was first to roll and she won first and you won 2nd, but your uncle didn't play?
That was the holiday's.
Remember that day you were playing on the tablet all day; when you went to bed but you could’nt?
Remember when you were playing on your tablet and when you first got on your tablet you saw the background; it reminded you of your family?
That’s the holiday’s.
Well written Presley. You have followed the model well and as the reader I can see all the activities you were describing. Next time you could add some more detail to the 2nd and 3rd verses like you have in your 1st verse.
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